Whisper

I heard a whisper but no one was there... 

Imagine you heard a whisper but couldn’t see who had whispered. 

Write to narrate (tell) a story about a whisper. 

Who or what whispered? Why were they whispering? 

Think about: 

where your story is set 

who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel 

the problem and how it is solved 

the order of your ideas and how they are linked 

Remember to: 

choose your words carefully 

take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences 

edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work. 

Plan:

What problem did the whisper lead to?	The whisper leaded to a secret birthday party
How was the problem solved?	At the end it was a great birthday party

Start Writing here: 

I heard everyone whispering besides me

¨can't you wait for the surprise¨ Roshella said to Emily¨yes i'm thinking for the

birthday party we put some candy in the balloons and pop the balloon¨ I heard tons

of whispers in the class even the teacher was whispering to a another teacher,

when I always get home my Mum is always whispering when she talks to

my teacher on my phone. Once I got in bed all could think about was the 

whispers and why was my Mum Whispering too? I opened my eyes and I felt tired.

I stood up trying not to fall on the ground. I opened the door and it was all dark.

All I could see was a table with cake and yummy foods ¨SURPRISE!!!¨

everyone said, everyone from my class was at my house even the

teachers ¨wait it's my birthday, is this what all the whispering 

was a about¨ my Mum looked at me ¨of course darling do

you think I will keep any secrets