my writing rubric

I need to work hard on my punctuation

I realised and so other things       

                     

      Friendship

                  Introduction

 Some people don't know if you have fake friends or real friends read this
and find out maybe you friends might not me like this but still

         They could be a real friend with a different attitude.

What it means to be a good friend. Friends are nice and they
accept you for who you are, during the good and bad situations.
honest enough to tell you when you're not being a good friend.

Good friends are loyal to you and honest when they tell you something,
most people want friends who they can trust.

What a real friend is. Real friends will check if you're alone and
you are looking sad, you should always appreciate what you're
friends do to you be supportive in their biggest dreams, be there for your friends.

What people need in a friend. When you come in with friends
you want them to have an attitude that you like,
we like friends that are nice and loyal, honest also trustworthy.

What to say to your friends. To make your friends day
better you should say you have a beautiful smile, you are
a strong person, you are the funniest person i’ve met.

Depression. One of your friends might have depression cheer
them up if you see them alone depression is a powerful thing that makes you
feel sad just say to your friend that my friend is strong.

In Conclusion. Be there for help them achieve their goals

Support them in the moments when they don't know what to say. 

ideas	S&L	organstain	vocab	Sentence structure	punctuation	spelling
4	4	5	4	5	4	4

I gave myself 4 for ideas I have lots of information
that connect to the topic

I give me 4 for sentence language I use appropriate
words for my writing

I give me 5 for organstian my ideas are organised
in paragraphs 

I give me a 4 for vocab I choose words that people
will be interested in 

I give myself 5 for sentence structure I checked
my words and they are right 

I give me 4 for punctuation I use full stops and
capital letters correctly

I gave me 4 for spelling I spell words correctly

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My Spelling

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