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Friday, July 30, 2021
Reflection Robotics 30/07/2021
Reflection: Robotics
Today in Robotics we: had our second to last session for the year, and we tried to finish our Robots by Lunchtime.
I am happy that: we completed some parts of the Robot, and everyone did lots of work.
Next time maybe we should: work together and stop arguing about who should build parts of our robots.
Thursday, July 29, 2021
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Thursday, May 27, 2021
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Thursday, March 11, 2021
Whisper
I heard a whisper but no one was there...
Imagine you heard a whisper but couldn’t see who had whispered.
Write to narrate (tell) a story about a whisper.
Who or what whispered? Why were they whispering?
Think about:
where your story is set
who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
the problem and how it is solved
the order of your ideas and how they are linked
Remember to:
choose your words carefully
take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.
Plan:
Start Writing here:
I heard everyone whispering besides me
¨can't you wait for the surprise¨ Roshella said to Emily¨yes i'm thinking for the
birthday party we put some candy in the balloons and pop the balloon¨ I heard tons
of whispers in the class even the teacher was whispering to a another teacher,
when I always get home my Mum is always whispering when she talks to
my teacher on my phone. Once I got in bed all could think about was the
whispers and why was my Mum Whispering too? I opened my eyes and I felt tired.
I stood up trying not to fall on the ground. I opened the door and it was all dark.
All I could see was a table with cake and yummy foods ¨SURPRISE!!!¨
everyone said, everyone from my class was at my house even the
teachers ¨wait it's my birthday, is this what all the whispering
was a about¨ my Mum looked at me ¨of course darling do
you think I will keep any secrets
Narrative writing
Narrative Choice board Activity:
Here you will need to pick on from each of the following.
One Character, One Item and One setting.
When you have these, you then will plan and write a Narrative using ALL THREE.
Remember to:
Plan effectively
Use amazing adjectives and vivid verbs.
Be creative, use your imagination.
What I chose: Fairy, backpack, underwater,
On a sunny day
a tiny fairy flew down into the water, she had a backpack to store food. The fairy came down to the water to get food for the baby fairies but there was a catch. It was very dangerous since there are sleeping sharks that come alive if you make a sound or step onto one of the traps.
The poor fairy had to go alone she could´t risk the baby fairies getting in trouble she flew down and down to the magic berries that all fairies eat she laid her hand on one berry and saw the sparkle the fairy started grabbing a bunch of berries to put in her bag she stepped back and felt her feet go down she looked everywhere and out came the sharks! The fairy gasped as she saw the sharks the fairy started swimming higher and higher but one of the sharks still managed to grab her tiny leg with their mouth. The fairy pulled up with her strength the shark let go of her leg so she quickly went up and flew up fast to get away from the giant sharks she flew on her land and looked at the baby fairies "i'm here! you sweeties and I got enough berries to last us a whole year" the fairy could grow some more magic berries so she doesn't have to go back to the sharks the baby fairies were happy they were all hugging the fairy.
Friday, March 5, 2021
Quality blog comment
Quality blog comment
WALT: write quality blog comment
I will have:
he mihi timatanga - greeting
he korero whakamihi - something you liked
whakawhanui te kaupapa -next steo
he patai - ask a question
