Opononi beach

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Opononi beach
On the first day of the holidays. ‘’Hurry up brush your hair’’ my mum yelled at my sister, I walked to the table because  the hair brush was there, I grabbed the hair brush and sat down on a hard green chair. I started to brush my hair. Mum called my uncle on her phone.  I was done brushing my hair. ‘’Hey uncle is here’’ I said to mum. My Mum said ‘’open the door’’  I went to open the door to lets go to ‘’Opononi beach now’’ I said. Mum and dad came so we hopped inside the car, our uncle drove us to Opononi beach.

When we were there our uncle made some burger’s we went to a wooden bench,  and ate our burgers. They were delicious. After that we were thinking of going on a boat. My mum said ‘’let’s go on a boat’’ our uncle said ‘’yes’’ we went on a pretty big boat, it  was so fun.
 After that we went back to our car and uncle drove               us back, we had 8 chicken nuggets for dinner it was so yum we ate  it all, our uncle went back home.
Then we decided to play  a game called donkeys I went on my sisters back on the bed it  was so funny she was acting like a real donkey she went on my back and she was heavy, I fell flat on the bed, then we went to the bed and slept .